IALT to use well chosen words.
The lion quietly follows his oblivious prey, through the long grass. He slowly creeps, closer and closer. Without warning he emerges from the grass and pounces at his prey!
Does anyone else have any ideas of other verbs I could have used?
I'm a student at Tawa Intermediate, Wellington, New Zealand. I'm in Room 14 and my teacher is Mr O'C. I'm a member of the amazing Pouakai Syndicate. Man United is the best
Wednesday, 16 May 2012
Thursday, 3 May 2012
My Love Letter
In my class we are writing love letters we had a choice to write a serious love letter a carcastic love letter or a 'Dear John' Letter, a Dear John Letter is when you write all these nice things and then you say it's over. I decided to do a Carcastic Dear John Letter to Rhys telling him that I'm dropping him from our football team enjoy :)
Wednesday 2nd May 2012
7 Rocky Road
Old Mans Valley
Dear Rhys Jennings
Rhys you’re a wonderful goalkeeper. You dive like a bird that
can’t fly, falling through the air. Your amazing reflexes are as quick as a
lazy snail.
The way you shout “KEEPER!” literally deafens my ears and I
play left wing, imagine what the defenders have to put up with.
You’ve done well in keeper, only letting 25 goals in the
first four games. But the whole team including me have decided that you would
be better off with the B team, that is why we’re dropping you.
From
Matt and the team.
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