Wednesday, 16 May 2012

A lion stalking his prey-Verbs

IALT to use well chosen words.

The lion quietly follows his oblivious prey, through the long grass. He slowly creeps, closer and closer. Without warning he emerges from the grass and pounces at his prey!

Does anyone else have any ideas of other verbs I could have used?

Thursday, 3 May 2012

My Love Letter

In my class we  are writing love letters we had a choice to write a serious love letter a carcastic love letter or a 'Dear John' Letter, a Dear John Letter is when you write all these nice things and then you say it's over. I decided to  do a Carcastic Dear John Letter to Rhys telling him that I'm dropping him from our football team enjoy :)






Wednesday 2nd May 2012
7 Rocky Road
Old Mans Valley

Dear Rhys Jennings

Rhys you’re a wonderful goalkeeper. You dive like a bird that can’t fly, falling through the air. Your amazing reflexes are as quick as a lazy snail.

The way you shout “KEEPER!” literally deafens my ears and I play left wing, imagine what the defenders have to put up with.

You’ve done well in keeper, only letting 25 goals in the first four games. But the whole team including me have decided that you would be better off with the B team, that is why we’re dropping you.

From

Matt and the team.